i am replaced my eyes - visual poem

I have to admit I'm not wholly convinced by a lot of my visual work. Not that it feels wrong, or that it hasn't been worked on, but that despite this it looks very retro to my eyes. It doesn't really seem to be doing anything especially adventurous, especially judged on mainly visual terms. That said, as with my sound work I really don't have much idea of where any of this is going, or what any of the lines, circles, spaces or relationships might mean.

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